Friday, February 8, 2013

Under Graduate - Long Essay - University of Georgia



Long Essay - Part 2 - Long Essay (5,000 character limit, including punctuation and spaces)

1.    In the Georgia Tech spirit of innovation and improving the human condition, describe a societal problem that exists locally, regionally, nationally or globally and propose a feasible solution.


As a human being, I am affected by many unfortunate situations around me. Poverty, drought, famines, diseases, and many others leave a profound effect in my mind. Though we may not be able to eradicate those that are caused due to nature’s wrath there are many others which we can avoid. One of them is global warming.
Global warming has been occurring throughout the world and this has resulted in deteriorating the climatic conditions not only over a particular region, but the world over. Now it is difficult for us to say that in India we have primarily three seasons – summer, winter and rainy. No longer do these seasons last for the average three to four months as before.  The summers are harsh with rising temperatures, the winters are barely noticeable, and the rains cease to stick to it pre-determined timelines. All this has resulted in increasing poverty as farmers are not able to sow and reap their harvests in time. The repercussions are even felt by the consumer as the cost of necessary food supplies has gone beyond the common man’s reach.
Since global warming increases the current temperatures, the rate of evaporation would increase extensively and would result in an increased precipitation along with melting of ice packs and polar ice-bergs. This would result in lower annual temperatures. The greenhouse effect is one of the main and initial causes of global warming. The most common greenhouse gases are water vapor, carbon dioxide, methane and ozone. These gases absorb infrared radiation of light and trap the heat caused by it within the lower atmosphere causing the heating up of the entire atmosphere. These gases have increased in volume due to industrialization and use of fossil fuels. The air we breathe is turning more and more poisonous with each passing day. Deforestation also caused a lot of carbon dioxide emission into the atmosphere as; forests remove and store carbon dioxide from the atmosphere. All carbon dioxide is now being released into the atmosphere. Scientists have come with strong evidence to suggest that these phenomena are having a major role in the increase of intensity of extreme storms worldwide.
When I read about the effects global warming, a sense of insecurity seeps into me. If this has already happened, what may happen to us in the future? It is a worrying sign for the future generations and our survival on this planet. I believe that all of this can still be reversed and our planet can still be stabilized in a manner where it can sustain mankind for infinite centuries to come.
Consumption of fossil fuels especially carbon-intensive coal should be reduced dramatically. Alternative sources of fuel should be developed and adopted for regular use. Solar energy should be harnessed. Solar energy is renewable and does not emit any harmful gases back into Mother Earth. Especially in a country like India which is sunny all through the year. Every home in India should be tempted to invest in these solar systems which in turn will become a source of revenue generator for the family in years to come. This would also help each individual in playing their part towards protecting the environment. Technology should be developed in a manner which would allow us to store carbon emissions underground and away from the atmosphere.
I myself contribute to cutting down on carbon emissions by regularly using public transport. I also am very particular about saving electricity and switch off lights every time I leave a room and also make limited use of air conditioners. In addition, I generally walk short distances rather than make use of an automobile. I love cycling too. Not only does it help cut down carbon-emissions but also helps keep us fit and healthy.
We recently had a very interesting seminar in our locality and almost every home in the locality has adopted measures to conserve energy and use appliances that are energy efficient. All light bulbs got replaced with fluorescent low watt bulbs. Living in a tropical country like India, we do not need a dryer to dry our clothes. Most women present pledged to avoid the use of dryers. Cutting down on garbage was another option everyone decided to follow. Planting trees is one activity that I am happy to note is happening all over the place. In the city I live in Mumbai, the municipal authorities have become very strict on the use of non-degradable plastic bags. So we can combat global warming in small ways too. All that it requires is commitment to do the right thing by every individual. I believe that every human being should personally contribute to reversing the effects of global warming first. If everybody contributes in their own small way, it will make a huge difference in global warming intensity and reduce atmospheric temperatures too. This is an issue of global importance and should be taken very seriously or else we might face severe consequences in the form of natural calamities and phenomena.

Under Graduate - Short Essay - University of Georgia



Short Essay
Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech and what do you hope to contribute to our community?
I chose Georgia Tech as it is the third best university in the world for mechanical engineering. Your course programs combine career related experience with classroom studies. The alternating assignments between classroom and industries will definitely boost my interests and help me in achieving my career goals – which is to be a mechanical engineer with vast global experience in different aspects of mechanical engineering. My experiences in life have taught me to be resilient in all my endeavors and not be setback by failures. I believe positive attitudes are infectious and I will be able to pass on these progressive attributes to my classmates. With my expertise in sports such as Table-Tennis and Badminton I would be an active contributor in inter college competitions and try my best to win a few medals. I see myself contributing my 100% to community service activities such as Innovate Relief which will allow me to apply coursework to projects thus making a difference in people’s lives.

Under Graduate - Michigan Essay 4



4. Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests? (500 words maximum)

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Before applying to Michigan University, I felt I should try and understand the university and its course curriculum as best as I could. Not only did I go through the website but I visited various forums that were talking about education in Michigan, more so in USA in general. What I came to understand is that I am completely in synch with the way Michigan handles its education, its extra-curricular activities, and manages its diversified student body.

Education at Michigan will develop my learning abilities, and learning as much as I could from a world-class faculty, will help me prove my abilities amongst my contemporaries. I also see myself getting ample opportunities to apply knowledge and new techniques and function on multi-disciplinary teams. I am looking forward to devoting myself to a long career in Mechanical Engineering and make the most out of the vast knowledge I will gain at your university.

As I browsed through the course curriculum at Michigan, I was deeply impressed with the subjects on offer. The Design and Manufacturing Course, Automotive Engineering Course and Multidisciplinary Design are some of the subjects that helped me decide to pursue my undergraduate study in Michigan. Also the different topics like Vehicle Ride Performance and Steering System Performance, Design Projects, and the ample practical opportunities that I would be getting at Michigan has helped me to finalise my choice of university.  What I have understood from other students who have completed their Bachelors at Michigan is that, it is one of the best universities in the world to offer world-class interning opportunities to its under-graduates.

As I see it today, all the above courses will guide me towards my interest which is to be working in the automotive industry in the design field. The Technical Elective course of Design and Manufacturing will really help deepen my knowledge in the area of my interest. Also, the Multidisciplinary Design minor would help me get a better understanding of classroom theories in a practical manner. So, it will develop my knowledge of automotives and mechanics holistically.

The course will be demanding but I am prepared to fulfil the rigorous demands of this course. I am even contemplating the dual degree option which is a good opportunity for students like me. I would take a call on this once I am in the university and understand that I will be in a position to satisfy the subject requirements of both the programs.

Under Graduate - Michigan Essay 3



3. Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)

India is a land of cultural diversity and I have grown up with friends and neighbours belonging to different communities. In a cosmopolitan city like Mumbai, which is where I live, it’s difficult to stick to the ways of my original community.

I am a Hindu by religion and my community is based in Bangalore, India. Our staple food is rice. We celebrate many festivals all throughout the year. However, as I have been brought up in Mumbai which is known for its diversity and mixed culture, I am now a person who has acquainted himself with all kinds of people from different religions. I celebrate festivals which Hindus do not. For example, I celebrate Christmas every year.

Also, although my staple food is rice, I prefer wheat and corn over rice. Hence I am different in many ways from most people in my community. In my family, mostly everyone is an entrepreneur. There are some who belong to the service sector. But the main characteristic is that everyone is hard working and determined. I believe I have imbibed these characteristics from them. My hometown Bangalore is idyllic whereas the city I live in, Mumbai is quiet a riot. I am equally at home in both these places. I love the solitude, I love the bustle. I am a completely cosmopolitan citizen of India and the values I have inherited, irrespective of where I get it from,  are mostly those that will help me become a respected individual.

Under Graduate - Michigan Essay 2



Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
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My father would often tell me that the elevator to success is out of order. We all have to climb the stairs. The harder we try, the higher we reach. My father’s advice would often come to my mind whenever I felt that I have failed to perform. So I would try harder. All my personal as well as academic challenges impacted me significantly and I turned out to be a better performer and achiever after each challenge.
One such experience which I wish to write down as an example is my tryst with Table Tennis, a sport I loved and which I thought I knew very well. I never took the extra effort of practising it daily or enrolling for coaching classes. I did pursue normal Tennis and Badminton classes in a very casual manner. I thought I played quiet well – this feeling lasted till I realised I was not winning a single game for myself or for my school. My contribution to the team was also not noteworthy. Then, I decided to enrol for Table Tennis with specialised coaching, as I wanted to excel in the game. At that point, I understood that I had the ability to realise my short-comings and take remedial actions to correct the same.
My housing complex had a Table Tennis facility, and I would find myself practising and competing almost every day. I was constantly praised for my ‘smashing’ technique. I improved on it each passing day. My professional trainer also helped me develop my skills so that I could now compete at a much larger level. I started taking part in competitions in school. Training is one part but enduring the pressure of a game is another. I found out that I broke under pressure several times. Numerous participation and several lost matches made me stronger and helped me developed my mental agility. I would no longer crumble under pressure.
By the time I entered 10th grade, I started winning a few games. This prompted me to take part in inter-school competitions. Now this was a much bigger arena and new talents to tackle. The exposure helped me to constantly train myself to be a better player than what I was a day before. I developed newer techniques, observed other players and picked up valuable tips from their styles.
Finally, our school won the best school team prize in the year XXXX and I was overjoyed. This time, I was proud of my contribution to the school’s success. I was proud of my team mates and was happy to realise they felt the same about me.
Overall, my journey as a non-descript player to a winning team member taught me valuable principles of life such as a desire to learn, withstand pressure, accept failures and a lot more. And I believe these learning will be a part of my development all through my life.